Hi a twist indeed! But I'd use a taxi, is that better? Well done!
I was trying to portray the idea that both of them missing the bus. They are not suppose to know each other so would a taxi be appropriate? I also have friends suggesting I make it such that they both ran after the wrong bus. Is that a good idea?Thanks!
Maybe the bus at the end is too near to portray the fact that they've missed it?
good point michael. Thanks. I'll see what i can do about it.
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Hi a twist indeed! But I'd use a taxi, is that better? Well done!
I was trying to portray the idea that both of them missing the bus. They are not suppose to know each other so would a taxi be appropriate?
I also have friends suggesting I make it such that they both ran after the wrong bus. Is that a good idea?
Thanks!
Maybe the bus at the end is too near to portray the fact that they've missed it?
good point michael. Thanks. I'll see what i can do about it.
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